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There Is Still Hope

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Do not go into the darkness
Where all your fears hide out of sight
For that is where hope escapes you
please, stay here in the light

As the darkness calls you out
Beconing you forward
Do not give up hope
For in this world
In the hearts of others
You can find love

The darkness is winning pulling you in
But look the other way
See your once called friends
Could they be called that once more?

See them still care
Though wounds are still sore
And as the darkness seems to envelope you
remember
you can find hope once more

Look in the hearts
Of friend still here
Know they shall leave you never
See them still care
Standing by you forever

Allow them to stave the darkness
Enveloping your soul
For once you lose faith
You'll find a heart black as coal

Allow your past self to save you
From the darkness in your heart
Rejoin the world of love and joy
There still here
Even though worlds apart
So uh... not really sure where this came from but it came never the less. I have an idea of what it means to me... but um, even if you dont like it or if you utterly despise it... could you please tell me why? Or if you do happen to like it, which i hope some of you do... could you tell me what it means to you?
Thanks you,
christalfire
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lunarlover98's avatar
you sound like your lacking confindence in your own superb talent. so hopefully this gives you a little boost.

this is superb work. it makes me feel emotion, but i dont know which one. i fell saddness, that im alone in this. (im saying im the one your talking to. i even confused myself) that i feel im alone, with no way out but to go into the world which will take and murder my hope.

but i feel happy, because you have the confidence i can call those people friends again. just maybe. that maybe, just maybe, my hope will get me through.

this is a fantastic poem, and you did fantastic. whereever this came from, keep more coming. superb.